She promised, ‘You will soon be mine!’,
Securely locked the door,
And changed into a stunning line
Of briefs, the glass before.
The eager eyes took in her shape,
Attractive, svelte and trim,
For, even nothing her to drape,
She was still nice and slim.
With slow deliberation she
Began her love to strip;
Alluring sections she could see –
Her tongue ran over lip.
Desire rising to a peak,
She gazed upon that part
That she’d laid bare; still didn’t seek
Quite yet to make the start.
Then tantalizingly she placed
Her lips upon the round,
And touched with tongue; her pulse so raced,
She knew she’d heaven found.
For now she felt her love respond,
With sweetness quite sublime,
And as they formed their passion bond,
She knew had come the time.
Surrendering her senses to
Exquisite pleasure’s drive,
Began to suck – and then to chew!
And truly felt alive.
Too soon and all was in the past,
For lust put sense to flight,
And though she tried to make it last
She couldn’t get it right.
As long as it is seldom done,
She is quite happy that
She can surrender to such fun
Without becoming fat.
Though chick-lit may give sexy scenes,
For thrills one cannot beat
Good choc-lit, for this genre means
The scenes are far more sweet!
So Hiding Something was what she
Had, with her binge, in mind:
While Hiding Something, equally,
Within this rhyme you’ll find!
© Colonialist March 2013 (WordPress)
Aye, the food o’ the Gods… 😉
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I should speak to the gods about arranging for it to come with a ‘stop’ button.
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And angels have to be content with peanuts and jellytots.
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I am addicted to peanuts and jellytots, too, alas.
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hehe! Beautifully done! Choc-lit.
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Maybe a special publishing division should be initiated, devoted to the genre? 🙂
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Absolutely!
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I knew what was coming, if you know what I mean?
AD..”Col. I had the vision of a chocolate Magnum in my mind, by the second stanza.”
Yeah, right….liar, liar pants on fire! 😉
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That’s her story, and she’s sticking to it!
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I would never argue with a lady. And AD may well have a loaded piano at hand!
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Hehehe…….I enjoyed your fun poem, Col. I had the vision of a chocolate Magnum in my mind, by the second stanza. 😀
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*devastated at not having succeeded with the illusion*
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I think we’re often on the same wave-length. 😆
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You see, the trouble is, we know you too well. Chick lit is not reeeeally your scene, not really actually. So when you start with such a scene, we start looking for the clues.
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Aha, yum I’ll hide it in my tum!
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Ahhh the chocolate… had me going there for a minute…
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Oh, good! Such was my fiendish plan!
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At least chocolate is a delightful sin.
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It is a pleasure to treasure!
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I must prefer choc-late to chick-lit! Thanks for such a FUN poem, Col! 😀
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Glad it gave you fun – as I had in writing it!
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Quite succinctly expressed – the whole chocolate scene. Hopefully you’re a lover as most of us are Col!!
I saw something on FB once – something to the line of The meaning of life. And all things pointing to chocolate as that meaning 😉
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I am a not-so-secret chocolate binger. If I start a slab, I can’t stop!
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I hear you 😉
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Still made my mouth water and my senses fully alive. Damn you, Col 😉
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So sorry! 🙂
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Was it Cadbury’s Bournville you had in mind, Pussycat? 😀
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hehe AD that’s EEEVIL!
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😀
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Does this have a rating, as in films,, X rated or U great lines…;)
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Does seem to need X rating, doesn’t it – and of course, chololate is truly sinful!
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Shew! 😉
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Lust is aroused? 🙂
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As a chocholic……
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… you fully identify! 🙂
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😉
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