The current Haiku Monday Competition is being hosted by the previous winner, Where Whispers Linger. My three are striking examples of my horrible habit of doing frivolous ones in rhyme.
Crash, flash, together:
Still alright, but awful fright –
Bright summer weather!
A bolt from the blue?
Flying true, and frying you –
This fall is blue, too!
Lightning, it strikes one,
With a spring a shock may bring –
Your season is done!
© Colonialist November 2013 (WordPress)
And congratulations to you! You are our next haiku Monday host .. 🙂
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Oh, this is foam ..
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Oh, wow!
Thanks!
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I always enjoyed creating haikus. So many possibilities and they all seem effective in their brevity.
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I’m not very good at it, which is why I use gimmicks!
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I thought they were great!
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Love them, Col, especially the first! 😉
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Really enjoyed catching up on your posts. You are so lucky to wake up to such beautiful views everyday!
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Good to have you visiting again!
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Nice, Col 🙂
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No troubles with rhymes hereabouts, or… thereabouts? In digital, presence is ephemeral? Oh, back to the point. I have always thought to do rhymes but… this guys can’t… rant and rhyme at the same time? Dunno. Just… I don’t have it going on. So it’s always something to see.
And that visual? That’s like… it. I keep thinking to avoid looking. Someone was rather talented, lucky, and maybe dead to get that shot. Or mocks it up well. Dunno that either. I don’t know much, but I do thank you for stopping in and offering your services. /hat tip
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It was easy to clear up the photographer. Just a dustpan and a brush.
Some people are wistfully wishing the haiku writer went the same way.
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too funny 🙂 nothing worse than a haiku purist I say
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*ruffled* But these are copybook ones – five, seven, five, and with a twist and a season and all? 🙂
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ah it’s good to read and chuckle!
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I’m sure haiku fanatics have passed out left, right and centre!
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Well that’s okay. They take themselves a bit too seriously anyway.
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groaning but laughing at your take on the sacred haiku.
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Sheer blasphemy!
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haiku bard’s plucky
twice roll the dice, verse strikes thrice
third time’s unlucky
No, I don’t know what it means either…
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It works – only lacks a season!
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I see the light at the end of the tunnel!
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That isn’t a flash of inspiration – it is a charge seeking polarity!
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Love it…
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I thought you might find it shocking!
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