” We are asking for a 33-word response to the following snippet:
The first time I saw. . .
Here’s the catch: all of your 33 words must be one syllable each. – See more at:
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2014/01/trifextra-week-100.html#sthash.yXY8k3Gs.dpuf “
We had come by a cat
I said, ‘Do you then wish
To weigh in with some fish?’
But as it would grow up a male,
It would not stay to scale.
© Colonialist January 2014 (WordPress)
What a fun read. Great job! 🙂
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Great work.
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Good to know you think so – I had fun with it
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A delightful finale to a epic journey through all 108 posts. Thanks for the bout of cleverness that ensued. I enjoyed myself here. 🙂
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A marathon trip, indeed! Your endurance and stamina are to be commended!
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Love the clever title!
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The first time I saw a chop saw in a box was the time it was used to chop up some locks, which was odd as the locks had locked up that box — or did I mean clocks?
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Single syllables – check.
Word count – check.
Rhyming – not demanded, but gives an extra bonus.
You should post it!
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Wasn’t sure if I”d wished deadli…
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or even missed it…
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How does one wish or miss a deadli…?
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I do not think this is a breeze
I cannot write with much ease
I have to think about what to write
This could keep me up all night
So I will leave it all to you
To write the words so clear and true
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You would have been getting there – only two two-syllable words, and a few too many … 🙂
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Totally delightful! Thanks so much for linking up!
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It was tricky – but fun!
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comprehensively punned.
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Puns? Me, doing puns? *innocent look*
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You are so good at this type thing… you must have a very vast vocabulary…
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Thanks for saying so! Playing with words does encourgage one to want to get to know a greater number of them!
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You’re never at a loss for words, Col. 🙂
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Well, all they wanted here was a few really short ones!
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That’s a whale of a tale, Col.
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As long as it didn’t have you blubbering! 🙂
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You do have a weigh with words!
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It gets a bit heavy, even when I try to give a light touch!
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😆
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tuff chal’ bro! I tip my bow tie to you 🙂
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Fanks!
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