Today’s NaPoWriMo prompt calls for ten terminological inexactitudes in ten lines:
I am the fairest of the fair:
Though I have lost all of my hair,
My teeth are all mine,
I don’t have a line.
And look quite magnificent bare;
My bulging biceps will impress;
I’m beautiful when I cross-dress,
And look twenty-nine;
This rhyme is divine!
I never from a point digress …
Just for fun, I refined my terza rima of yesterday a bit by pruning a beat from each line. I think this proves less can be more:
This day, nearly-six-year-old
Entered for official trial;
Weather had turned rather cold.
We’d been at it quite a while,
For eight hundred metres, swum,
Has intimidating style.
Of her peers appearing, some
Failed at a two-hundred ask,
But, unruffled, through she’d come.
Pause to wave; in praise to bask;
Grinning; not the slightest frown;
Going on to do her task.
Length on length and up and down;
Fifteen had become her score …
Minutes thirty-two, the crown,
When completed was one more!
Love the naughty rhyming one. I’d rather not see me bare! Your terza rima works, but still the original natural story-telling one does it for me best.
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There is, actually, something rather jerky about terza rima.
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It should be compulsory to attach a photograph to witness you are telling the truth, lol!
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I don’t want to dazzle everyone completely!
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I almost spit my wine at the line “I look quite magnificent bare.” 🙂
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I’m delighted you bared it all for us, Col.
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I barely scraped the surface!
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No fibbing, I am saying nuttin!
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You have the right to remain silent …
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I can only imagine what my version of this would look like :S
Brilliantly crafted as ever. And you terza rima is fab too!
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You’d need to be UNcomplimentary!
I was pleased with that pruned version!
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I believe you!
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Uh-oh! Where did I go wrong?
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Should I be telling you a fib of my own?
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It is in fashion! 🙂
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hmmm, now I’m going to have to give this some thought. Fibby, fibby, fibby, where are you? flaming heck an official window to fib and nothing comes to mind 🙂
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That is BRILLIANT! What a fabulous fib!
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🙂
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i won’t even start with the awful fibs about myself, sure I could spin a tale!
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Having met you, Col, I know the first poem to be quite an accurate description. Oh dear, my nose just grew a few inches! 🙂
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Lovely photo now that is not a fib!
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No, that was gen you wine!
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Love them both!
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Guess which set is true! 🙂
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Ha! First here for today’s poem, which was an extra-special treat and has coloured my impressions of you once and for all 😀
Like the changes to yesterday’s, too. This NaPoWriMo is a blast, isn’t it?
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You were very fast on the draw! You believe every word of it?
It certainly provides great opportunities for verbal play!
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