I have been mightily busy with editing exercises and other stuff, as a dearth of posts and visits may have indicated. I dropped behind hopelessly on Pooky’s Poems prompts, but there was one I was determined to follow, and so I present the one of the 11th May, ‘write a poem set in the street where you grew up’.
A Place of Dreams
I lived in many streets
When I was still a boy –
One, recollection greets
With all the greatest joy.
I did not know its name:
‘The Heads’ was quite enough
To make quite sure that came
Our mail, and all that stuff.
Front garden a lagoon;
The back part, really steep;
Roofed water tank quite soon
Served car on top to keep.
And on the farther side
Green hillside was the view,
While up the river wide
Were mountains looming, too.
An island to our right –
From causeway, access meant –
Heads mouth just out of sight
To left, where channel went.
And when it was low tide
To island we could go
On foot; at high we’d ride
A boat, which we would row.
Games played upon the sand,
Where later we would swim;
The fishing there was grand,
If one should take the whim.
From upstairs bedroom, cast,
A line, left overnight,
And I would break my fast
On fish, with great delight.
A gentle little stroll
To where our street would end –
A place where breakers roll,
And mighty cliffs descend.
The Blowhole would admit
A wave, without a doubt …
Explosively would spit
A mighty shower out!
A spit of different kind
At end of Leisure Isle
Where pansy shells one’d find
When tide was out a while.
Or, out across the hills,
To see the bushbuck roam,
With secret pathway thrills,
Where leopards had their home.
And caves all massed with bats,
Near towering rocky spire;
Rock-rabbits having spats,
In altercations dire.
These lived at Coney Glen –
On other side of hill –
We’d visit there, and then
The Dripping Well would thrill.
Such recollections pour
In never-ending stream,
Each one produces more
Of what made up that dream …
That street where I grew up,
Now known as George Rex Drive,
Most truly filled my cup,
And made me feel alive.
What a privilege, to grow up on the Knysna heads! 🙂
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I only wish it had been for my entire childhood. Then, in adulthood, S and I wanted to go and live there after we really got the zig with the Reef, but economics dictated Durban instead.
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You are lucky you grew up in one of our favorite places.
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I wish I’d had time for doing more of my growing-up there.
Then disaster – in the form of a motor-bike accident -, struck.
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Delightful to read, and wonderful photos to accompany. You’ve put a lot of yourself into this one, and it is a joy to read!
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I simply could have gone on and on.
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When I was a child we used to go to Cape Town once a year on holiday and stopped off in Knysna. What lovely memories. I sat at the view site at the Heads and used to sketch my time away. You were so lucky to actually live there. 🙂
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The one past the tearoom, or on top of the hill?
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On top of the hill I think.
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A wonderful place, indeed, Col, and a fine poem.
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One of the world’s more spectacular spots, indeed. Thanks!
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Beautiful. 🙂
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It is indeed a stunning place.
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🙂
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It must have been amazing growing up there! It’s super stunning
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It was even more stunning in those early unspoilt days.
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a lovely walk down a part of your childhood. In the midst of it all, we managed to find some fun along the way.
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I can never resist traces of levity!
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You painted a picture with words and brought back many memories for me.
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I’m glad my memories generated others.
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You’ve described everything so well in your beautiful poem Col. Great photo’s. It’s really beautiful there. 😀
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Thank you. To understand some of it, you had to be there!
It is always spectacular.
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Very nice . . . despite the form it was delivered in.
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This one wasn’t quite Really Awful.
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An illustrated poem . . . perfect!
My favorite pic: Knysna Heads
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The sight of those headlands is enough to gladden any eye.
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What a spectacular place to grow up in Col!
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It was amazing!
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It is so beautiful where you live.
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We are a long way from that particular stretch of coastline now, alas!
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What an amazing and beautiful place to spend your childhood.
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It was! I just wish more of it had been spent there than was the case.
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A lovely tour, Col. I really love the Western Head shot.
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That chunk of sandstone is not only impressive, but it made an interesting climb, too. One to be avoided by the faint-hearted!
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Just beautiful !
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Progress has spoilt a lot of it, but it is still an amazing part of the world.
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What a fabulous place to grow up. Your poem tells a story of a happy childhood.
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That part of it was wonderful. Others … less so.
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And now you live on Bluff
Where whaling ships once lay
To be replaced by tankers big
So cars can be on their way.
(A bit feeble, but still) 😉
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Fitting! I’m not sure whether the whalers or tankers were worst, though.
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Ugh, I remember the whaling station!
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And the pong! Ugh …
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