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The latest prompt for NaPoWriMo again came just before electricity departed; yet again this offering was composed with laptop and solar lamp. The prompt is for a dialogue, so I added to the first stanza, which came into my head a few days ago, to make it into one:
It’s not the treat,
though sour or sweet,
That captivates a nation,
They rather find
it’s in the mind
As the anticipation!
No! Doing it
provides the bit
That everyone will treasure,
For they must taste –
or else will waste –
The essence of the pleasure!
Oh, rubbish, for
when one should ‘score’,
The climax there is fleeting,
Far more the sum
of what’s to come
Imagination greeting!
That is not true,
for should one ‘do’
A truly sumptuous dinner,
It is the force
of every course
That will provide the winner!
You can’t believe
that would achieve –
Once one had reached the venue –
The sheer delights
that come with rites
Of studying the menu?
So, in your mood,
you’d rather food
Be words on paper written?
Not something which
your taste-buds twitch
To have quite swiftly bitten?
First bite won’t last,
and in the past
That pleasure you’d be knowing;
Much rather one
puts off the fun …
Hey! Where d’you think you’re going?
That you prefer
thus to defer
I’m finding most depressing,
So do not fear,
I’m out of here –
You may as well start dressing!
(Just for the sheer fun of it, let me know honestly whether you thought the second speaker – the one buzzing off – was male or female?)
Was this a dirty poem *innocent look*
The last line makes me think that the one performing a disappearing act is a female
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Put it this way: I don’t think they were playing scrabble!
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At first, Col, I thought I was the second speaker. I then read again, and then started to notice it was more female. And when I got to the last line, I knew it.
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That is how I envisaged it when I wrote it!
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Damn I have missed your poetry whilst on my temp absence… I always enjoy the read… second speaker? Female…
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Hope they are still up to standard!
I thought so, but wondered if the ladies might not think otherwise.
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No dancing on ceilings at your place and no slamming of doors either !
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I always look forward to your poetry – it never disappoints! Loved this piece. I’m torn as to the gender of the second speaker, but I’m going for female. Nothing like a good old storming off after a disagreement 😉
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Thanks!
Your choice breaks a pattern I thought might well form, of each gender opting for the opposite one!
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It’s the rebel in me! Sorry!
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Ditto. You make writing poetry look so easy. and I know it isn’t…
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I have developed a skill in doing doggerel through lots of practice – actual poetry would be another matter!
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I say it’s one impatient male!
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Interesting conclusion – I hope I get lots of responses to see if a pattern emerges!
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