NaPoWriMo Day Twenty Two has a challenge to write a ‘Pastoral’ poem. Always one for saving labour, I thought I could just use three of mine I happen to have in stock …
Green Wheatfields (semi-serious)
Green wheatfields rippling joyously in balmy summer breeze
Vouchsafe a sight to soothe the soul, and put the heart at ease –
Except for farmers, waiting every day in morbid gloom
For Russians to invade and bring those verdant growths to doom;
They know that wheatfields, even those that are the very best,
Are subject to destruction by the Russian Aphid pest;
McCarthyism is with every farmer closely wed –
A constant fear they must beware a Red within their bed!
Green Wheatfields – a Pastoral Poem
See waves of wind that wash across
Those vivid fields of verdant green
In rippling sweeps and dancing swathes;
Hypnotic, like the sea; a scene
Of restfulness with action twinned,
And constant movement in the wind;
A microcosm in a glorious spread
Of surging life-forms, out of which are fed
So many; yet the movement is untrue –
For they are rooted where they’ve always been.
Green Wheatfields –
The height of Really Awful Trite
green wheatfields in the summer sun
are lovely each and every one
and after work when day is done
you sneak in there to have some fun
I have run out of superlatives to share of your poetry… how you manage to turn out 3 like this leaves me dumb founded and in awe of you ability…
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It isn’t that special. As I have said repeatedly, it simply comes of long practice! But, of course, I bask in the admiration!
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I loved them all…
and am awed at how you can turn your hand so skilfully to each different mood !!!!
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I have difficulty with the serious ones. My quirky nature makes me keep wanting to steer them into flippancy!
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I would be happy to see the demise of those words “really awful” from your headings: they are not awful, they are good, and clever and witty, so stop putting yourself down. The Pastoral pleased me most, but I liked them all.
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But ‘Really Awful’ is what I have advertised for years!
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But it’s untrue. I shall report you to the ASA
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Oops. OK, OK, I’ll lower my standards!
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Brilliant! All three are very well done but that last one really did make me chuckle!
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What I enjoyed about that third one is that the first three lines could be leading up to a serious pastoral – and then the last one kills it stone dead! It could have carried on:
Still shimmer in the moonlight fair
With tranquil luminescence rare … etc etc.
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Exactly! And what I love it that it’s up to the reader to decide what fun is being had, yet you could lay money on what everyone is thinking 😉
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I noticed that!
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Ha, ha, the last poem!
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I should have explained that they have a football field in the middle …
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I really like the second one and how you show it’s like the sea, but a deception.
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One of my rare serious moments!
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