Really Awful Hay-Diddle-Diddle-(Na)-Kus.


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We haven't lost these sorts of views completely after the move - at least we can have supper with friends who still have them!

We haven’t lost these sorts of views completely after the move – at least we can have supper with friends who still have them!

The view from the deck on the left.

The view from the deck on the left, above.

And so we come to NaPoWriMo Day Twenty Seven, where the prompt challenges creation of six-word haiku forms known as hay(na)ku with lines of one, two and three words. As usual I insist on complicating things (and, no doubt, mucking them up) by putting rhyme above reason:

Hay(na)ku
 I do
Just for you 

It
Is known
Horns are blown 

Six
Words arrange:
Mix meanings strange! 

Synchronicity
Indicates felicity
Involving interwoven electricity. 

Religions
Offer smidgeons
Of actual, factual. 

Politicians
Came, snored;
Decisions had concord. 

Came
Without sword –
Game still conquered. 

Bugs
Are climbier –
Slugs are slimier. 

Fate:
However great,
You become ‘late’. 

Ten
Been poured –
‘Say when’ scored!

Do you have a favourite?  I’m sure you can guess which one mine is!

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Active septic geranium who plays with words writing fantasy novels and professionally editing, with notes writing classical music, and with riding a mountain bike, horses and dinghies.
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18 Responses to Really Awful Hay-Diddle-Diddle-(Na)-Kus.

  1. The Asian says:

    The snoring politicians made me think of exactly what we see on TV all the time!

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  2. Another form that’s right up your alley. Love them all!

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  3. bulldog says:

    Loved the snoring politicians…

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  4. I always love it when you really play with words.

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  5. Love them all, Col, but the snoring politicians conjured up the most vivid picture in my mind. 😯

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  6. ‘politicians came snored etc.,’ 😀 Who needs a view when you can borrow one from a friend – lucky you!

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  7. You win! Where’s the trophy for fancy tickling? Thanks for the smiles

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  8. Grannymar says:

    My favourite is:

    Bugs
    Are climbier –
    Slugs are slimier.

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