Food of Love or Poison

  Day 23

‘… write a double elevenie. The first line is one word, a noun. The second line is two words that explain what the noun in the first line does, the third line explains where the noun is in three words, the fourth line provides further explanation in four words, and the fifth line concludes with one word that sums up the feeling or result of the first line’s noun being what it is and where it is A double elevenie would have two stanzas of five lines each, and twenty-two words in all. It might be fun to try to write your double elevenie based on two nouns that are opposites, like sun and moon, or mountain and sea.…’

Music 
Enhances leisure
In great measure
As pure sonic treasure:
Pleasure.

 

Discord
Hearing numbs.
From amplifier comes
Screeches, wails, crashing drums:
Dumbs.

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