Ah, speckled bird with lilting song —
Thin notes that blend in quiet morn —
You yield in rain to longing born
In sky, to brilliant rippled course belong,
Far from the dusty earth forlorn.
Ah, speckled bird with lilting song —
Thin notes that blend in quiet morn —
You yield in rain to longing born
In sky, to brilliant rippled course belong,
Far from the dusty earth forlorn.
I don’t think I have ever seen the wordle words written in the given order before. This needs much applause especially as the word count is small too. Not only that but the poem makes sense. Full marks I think!
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Thanks! It is my personal challenge to do it this way every week. Often the sense suffers, but for last week I think I got it particularly right. This week’s one didn’t turn out too badly, also.
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How effortlessly this flows..a real accomplishmenr
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Thanks; frequently I am pleasantly surprised at how well the words slot together.
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This is lovely!
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Thank you for the kind comment. I was pleased with it, indeed.
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Exquisite, Leslie, so evocative.
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*highly gratified modest blushes*
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Gorgeous poem, and rhyming!
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Thank you; I sometimes wish I didn’t have this thing about rhyming, because it certainly complicates matters!
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It certainly is a challenge!
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That actually was an easy read. Nice.
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The words were kind to me this week!
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For once disperser got everything right, and left nothing foe me to say
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Good to hear! (Or see.) It helps to be a little less sparing with added words.
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You repaid them well.
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