Film Script


Alley shoot: a siren sound;

Style: Detective, where clues abound;

Lights give insight, live cameras shift

From tracks, to roadblocks, to permit, lift.

(Of course  I took this slant after the film script editing exercise I have just completed!)

© May 2019 Colonialist
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Active septic geranium who plays with words writing fantasy novels and professionally editing, with notes writing classical music, and with riding a mountain bike, horses and dinghies.
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10 Responses to Film Script

  1. That’s brilliant Leslie, has to be the best yet

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  2. I love the style of this, Col.

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  3. annell4 says:

    I like what you did with the world!!

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  4. That must have been an interesting class. Is editing an area you want to pursue?

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  5. 1sojournal says:

    Hello Colonialist. I just responded to your comment on my site and I even agree with it. I kinda like your take here. My biggest issue with the wordle was the word alley. Growing up, I lived in an area where there were alleys on every block. However, they were gravel and open, often with grass and even gardens bordering them. But alleys have come to mean exactly what you project here and I believe that’s because of the film industry. At least, that is what I would like to believe. However, I do really like what you did with the wordle words. It’s different and even quirky and I happen to like both of those things.

    Elizabeth
    https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2019/05/12/about-those-boulders/

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  6. It’s so brief but it says it all

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