Cartography of Depression


I managed particular economy of added words in doing Wordle 253 in the order given, but then had to tack on another ten to complete it with a rhyme scheme of ABACBC, and also add the above heading of three to make complete sense of it :

254

Draw maps of howling wilderness:

No cover, break or food,

And split with places of still less,

Where, lost, to front or rear a move

Maintains that hopeless mood

No change of vantage can improve.

© June 2016 Colonialist (WordPress)

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Active septic geranium who plays with words writing fantasy novels and professionally editing, with notes writing classical music, and with riding a mountain bike, horses and dinghies.
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30 Responses to Cartography of Depression

  1. Very emotional.
    I’ve written an article myself on my own depression and history – and how I believe writing helps us and can help us to combat this. Check it out if you like. https://emilycrutcheruk.wordpress.com/2016/09/29/how-writing-is-helping-me-combat-anxiety-and-depression/
    Emily x

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  2. I love the combination of creativity and depression. I’m creative and have had bouts of depression throughout my life, so I believe that they go together.

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  3. You are definitely a wizard with wordles.🙂

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  4. I have to know…how long does it take you to make all of this work out so well? I’m impressed!

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  5. Very interesting way of thinking, I have never seen anything like that
    Thanks for post

    Love, Health and Wealth
    Alex Moses
    https://alifeanswer.com/

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  6. Bravo. I couldn’t think what to do with the wordle, so chickened out.

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  7. annell4 says:

    It seems you have gotten to the “heart of the matter.” Really just wonderful!

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  8. Jae Rose says:

    Your economy of words worked a treat – almost like a swift ‘check-mate’ – sometimes when we are stuck..we are stuck..

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  9. Tamsin says:

    Baie mooi🙂

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  10. Wow! You even have meter and rhyme included. Great post.

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  11. Pamela says:

    Oh, rhyming. Not my strong suit. Like the others have said economy and rhyme, nicely done.

    Pamela

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  12. 1sojournal says:

    I can only second what De has already said. An economy of words plus a rhyme scheme. Beautiful work.

    Elizabeth
    https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2016/06/04/rear-view-mirror/

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  13. whimsygizmo says:

    Just excellent. I am fond of an economy of added words when using a word list. And to have done so with some meter and rhyme thrown in is just fantastic.

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