Film Script

Posted on May 12, 2019 by colonialist

Alley shoot: a siren sound;

Style: Detective, where clues abound;

Lights give insight, live cameras shift —

From tracks, to roadblocks, to permit, lift.

(Of course  I took this slant after the film script editing exercise I have just completed!)

© May 2019 Colonialist

About colonialist

Active septic geranium who plays with words writing fantasy novels and professionally editing, with notes writing classical music, and with riding a mountain bike, horses and dinghies. Recently Indie Publishing has been added to this list.
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10 Responses to Film Script

  1. LordBeariOfBow says:
    June 1, 2019 at 6:36 am

    That’s brilliant Leslie, has to be the best yet

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  2. purplepeninportland says:
    May 15, 2019 at 3:19 am

    I love the style of this, Col.

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  3. annell4 says:
    May 13, 2019 at 4:14 pm

    I like what you did with the world!!

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  4. morristownmemos by Ronnie Hammer says:
    May 13, 2019 at 3:17 am

    That must have been an interesting class. Is editing an area you want to pursue?

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  5. 1sojournal says:
    May 13, 2019 at 1:05 am

    Hello Colonialist. I just responded to your comment on my site and I even agree with it. I kinda like your take here. My biggest issue with the wordle was the word alley. Growing up, I lived in an area where there were alleys on every block. However, they were gravel and open, often with grass and even gardens bordering them. But alleys have come to mean exactly what you project here and I believe that’s because of the film industry. At least, that is what I would like to believe. However, I do really like what you did with the wordle words. It’s different and even quirky and I happen to like both of those things.

    Elizabeth

    About Those Boulders

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  6. larry trasciatti says:
    May 13, 2019 at 12:47 am

    It’s so brief but it says it all

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